Hi,
I don’t have much news, except that there’s an interesting new person in my class.
Her name is Amanda and she comes from Taiwan. 2 weeks ago she turned 18. She's slight and of medium height.
She has short straight black hair, pale flawless skin, blue eyes, a small nose and thin lips. She loves loose clothing and lots of jewellery. Her style of dress is distinctive and fashionable.
In spite of appearances, Amanda’s a quiet and shy person.
She never talks a lot. I think she prefers to listen. She’s very modest and polite. She’s also smart, interested in the universe and human development.
I think Amanda is a unique person. I would love to get to know her better. She's different to all the
other girls, there is something that attracts me to her. I think we would get along well because we have comparable interests.

So I need your advice. Do you think I should invite her to my house?

Love,
Łukasz

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