I acknowledge that you have tackled a difficult subject over the issues with safety protocols in businesses during COVID-19 in the article titled, how"How to know if it's okay to visit your favorite store or Restaurantrestaurant." Moreover, I recognize your achievements as a professional writer and public health expert. However, I would like to call attention to the way you introduced the medical expert's testimonies to support your argument. For that reason, when you introduced Dr. Benjamin as executive director of the American Public Health Association and provided the quote, "It doesn't mean you can't go outside... where you can chill out and relax" (Dr. Benjamin as qtd. Inquoted in Appleby), suggesting that people with a health condition should avoid outings during the pandemic. In contrast, it, this made the reader confused about whether Dr. Bejanmin is a trustworthy expert. Therefore, you should take into consideration the usage of poor word choice in future articles. Along with your article, I came across thean article titled "Safety Advice for Reopening: How to Reduce Your Risks as Coronavirus Lockdowns Ease" by Andre Petersen and noted the similarities in the structure of both articles. Despite the similarities in Ms.Petersen's article, the reader can notice the usage of different images to illustrate the advice Petersenthe author provided for each section. Nonetheless, in your article, you provided just one image that contradictsseems to contradict your advice on the usage of face maskmasks and social distancing. Ultimately, I appreciate your concern regarding our safety during COVID-19, and I hope my observations can contribute in your future articles.

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