She entered the home with an ecstatic smile on her young face, but then paused and felt alarmed at the silence of the house. Valencia had just turned 21, today was her special day; it was her birthday. They’re the only family she has, she knows no one except for her mother, father, sister Ariana, and brother Fallon. They all live in a monumental place, it was a big white big mansion set in the middle of the forest with trees surrounding the house and greenery on the sight of each window in the household. She was living the life of everyone’s dreams. Although Valencia had just broken up with her boyfriend Argo that day and lost her best friend Gloria due to him cheating on her, she didn’t let it affect her special day. Valencia was ecstatic to get back home while hoping for a surprise party. Nevertheless, she didn’t expect what was coming her way on that ride home.

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